All comments posted by Jame :
I will not rate this immediately, I'll wait for you to update your guide to make it look better. Because right now sadly, I would have to give it a 1/5 only because it's pretty painful to read.
Make it look neat, more organized, more enjoyable to read and you'll get so much more good ratings, trust me.
I've taken the liberty to edit your guide a bit to make it look better. Presentation is really important for guides, especially for build orders imo.
@Buzzjuice Very good comment
Nicely written and great idea to offer a replay to illustrate your guide :)
I've edited your guide a bit to make it look better. Hope you don't mind. Keep it up!
Pretty good guide. But I can't find that video you talk about in the guide.
Maybe you could simply upload a replay instead and simply link towards it?
Anyways, your guide will be even better with that video or replay.
That's much better Telecom. This guide is informative and has a much better presentation.
I'm gonna edit it a little to make it look neater.
Very basic information, but all true.
I'm a protoss player and I got most of my "easy" wins vs Zerg thanks to immortals. They just destroy Roaches so bad it's unfair.
Very nice tips. Where is PART 1 by the way?
And very nice comment there Seven. Inku you should definitely include some of it (if not all of it) in the guide.
Really like your writing style Buzzjuice. Very nice guide, looking forward to the addition for pictures.
Very nice writing style, and good guide.
One point though: you do not need creep to spawn a nydus worm anymore. I know it's quite imba, but that's how it is. No creep needed!
Might want to edit that in your guide ;)
Also, it's quite a bulky guide, it would be great to add a few pictures here and there to make it less wall-of-text'ish :P
You should rename your guide to "BUILD ORDER: Marine and Marauder vs Zerg".
And once again, your guide could really use some work. Make it look better, add paragraphs, colors, titles, etc.
Make it look neat and enjoyable to read!